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by Amber on November 20, 2009

in Home in the South,Mama Loves a Guitar Player,Poetry,Strange Brew

I.

In Alabama, through pine thicket,

the corner of Tennessee, and the deep end of several driveways,

I assume my role as big sister, daughter,

where pieces of identity have other shapes.

It fits now like handled hand-me downs,

ill and  faded, the most comfortable piece I have.

II.

Even in a different house, I wake

to same sounds and damp smells,

feeling tucked into high hollow rock.

Here, the fog is no cat, no beast but its own,

how it turns everything to ghost.

III.

Eagle Rock is a secret

jutted over untouched and rolling lines of mountain.

Once I took my husband there.

The mountain roared.

A thousand leaves unlatched their chimes.

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Have a good Thanksgiving. See you back here soon.

5RDTPFVP2RNG

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Kelly November 20, 2009 at 10:34 am

Oh, I do love your poetry… Have a wonderful week!

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Jo@Mylestones November 20, 2009 at 11:48 am

I’m thankful for you. :-)
Have a sweet, restful holiday.

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Aunt Pam November 20, 2009 at 12:31 pm

Sweet Home Alabama…. :-)

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Corinne November 20, 2009 at 3:55 pm

“It fits now like handled hand-me downs,

ill and faded, the most comfortable piece I have.”

It’s so good when it fits… Have a wonderful Thanksgiving :)

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brittney November 22, 2009 at 2:27 pm

Enjoying your poetry is a wonderful gift.

I hope you get to go back home for Thanksgiving, and I also hope to hear about it when you return!

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Eddie Jones November 22, 2009 at 5:34 pm

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Aunt Pam November 23, 2009 at 7:45 am

Oh! By the way… I love your poetry, your words that flow and a picture appears as though I am there with you.

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hamster November 23, 2009 at 3:50 pm

it’s that last line that really punches. that “chimes” is so out of place, so other to the actual sound of leaves that it feels ridiculously perfect. i know, for quite some time, i’ll be thinking of that word “chimes” when i look at the trees.

keep giving us the land!

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melody November 24, 2009 at 9:42 pm

i love you.
you got a TATTOO and you write poems and then you click “Publish”
and that makes you a hero to me.
thank you.

and i still have this pretty pitcher that i borrowed from your
kitchen this summer
and it should somehow get back into
your possession soon.

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